Week 4 - Session 1 (Class Critique)

Working with my peers, we gave a brief presentation of our poster and the idea that we were trying to convey within it. As a group, we gave each other feedback using the de bono hats. I found this session to be extremely helpful as I was a bit stuck on developments. I also didn't have a final phrase on my poster so I left it empty, however I wrote the list of phrases that could be potentially used and with the help of my group, I was able to pick some phrases that they found the most appropriate with my posters. Other that text, I was given feedback on my composition and how it can be improved. There was a suggestion that I can play around with the scale and composition of the football to intensify the struggle of wanting to play football (representing social activities) but couldn't as they were tied down by social media. My group also found that poster 1 and poster 2 were the strongest in terms of conveying my ideas. As independent studies, I began working towards my final poster with the feedback I got in mind.

Poster 1 

Poster 2 

Poster 3 

Poster 4