In today's session we had our final critique. We formed a group and put our posters on the wall to give and receive feedback. It was a useful lesson to get some final feedback before hand in and it was also interesting to see what other people has done. As for my poster, I was suggested to remove the plug as the poster is easier to read without it. The plug made the image seem un-balanced to others. I was also ask to play with proportion and scale with the hands and text as it seem like the poster is split in half. Too much white space? Some also commented on the cords being a little too big and suggested that I make them smaller so it looks more constraining on the wrist. The mouse also was blending in with the background, so they suggested maybe I could move it ever so slightly to the left so it is contrasting with the wrist. As for the cords, I could play around with colours of social media since social media is more than just Facebook.
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